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QUERY CRITIQUE

A place to put query letters out for critiques. Suggested sites for writing successful queries: http://queryshark.blogspot.com/ http://www.nelsonagency

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The best advice I got on writing a query letter was: figure out yout main character, what he wants, and what stands in the way of getting it. Once you know that, you can formulate a compelling hook and go on to write another paragraph or two of details.

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Tricia Simpson

Shoes in the Microwave Picture book Query 7 Replies

Okay I've read a lot about queries for novels but feel utterly clueless about picture book queries any comments would be appreciated. Dear Agent: Charlie is two years old. He plays hide and seek ...

Started by Tricia Simpson. Last reply by Tricia Simpson 1 day ago.

Rachel Aukes

Query critique request - Paranormal Romance 8 Replies

OK, this is my first shot at a query letter, so I'd love any advice you can offer. Here is the main content: : I’d like to submit my manuscript, BODY OF LIGHT, for your consideration. It’s the st...

Tagged: critique, letter, query, romance, paranormal

Started by Rachel Aukes. Last reply by Ruth Howell 1 day ago.

Terry Towery

DEVIL query letter for critique 11 Replies

Hi, This is my first query letter for my first novel. I'm a bit nervous about putting it out here, but I really want it to be as good as it can be. So fire away. Thanks Terry Dear (agent name), B...

Started by Terry Towery. Last reply by Ruth Howell 1 day ago.

Amy Jean Chase

Totally terrible query- Updated 7 Replies

Ok, here it comes.....possibly the worst query ever written. Tear it up. I can take it! Thanks for all the advice on my orginal query. I have updated it for additional feedback. Dear Fictitious Ag...

Started by Amy Jean Chase. Last reply by Amy Jean Chase Nov 25.

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Cheryl Comment by Cheryl on November 25, 2009 at 5:15pm
Again, I'm putting out the suggestion that someone open a group for synopses. They are as difficult to write as queries and just as necessary!
Cheryl Comment by Cheryl on November 25, 2009 at 12:13pm
Thanks, Ruth. There are links on this site for Successful Queries and Evaluated Queries, too, that are helpful.
Ruth Howell Comment by Ruth Howell on November 25, 2009 at 11:21am
Here is another link for learning how to write query letters:
http://queryclub.weebly.com/
Cheryl Comment by Cheryl on November 15, 2009 at 6:33pm
The BookEnds agency's blog gives tips on queries, too.

http://bookendslitagency.blogspot.com/search/label/query%20letters
Lydia Sharp Comment by Lydia Sharp on November 13, 2009 at 5:53pm
Kenneth,
Concerning short stories, the publisher/editor should have a detailed submission guide somewhere on their website. Some don't like attachments, others allow them, but only like certain types of files. Some want the story in "online" format, others want it in "standard" format. All are different, so yes, you must read the individual guidelines for each one you submit to. Best of luck!
Cheryl Comment by Cheryl on November 13, 2009 at 1:19pm
I don't know anything about short stories, although I've read it's very hard to get an agent for them unless you've published longer stuff. Maybe someone subscribing here has more insight. In any event, good luck.
Kenneth E. Olson Comment by Kenneth E. Olson on November 13, 2009 at 1:09pm
Concerning novels, I can see that. I'm curious about short story submissions, though. When they say email submissions are acceptable, but really don't go into any detail whether or not they want it in the text of the email or as an attachment. I just assumed (and I know what that means...:) that the email would act as a cover letter and the attachment would be the story itself. Of course, I always look at the individual publisher's requirements.

And I am looking for an agent, too, so this info comes in handy! Thanks!
Cheryl Comment by Cheryl on November 11, 2009 at 1:20pm
Kevin, as Chava said, the email is the query letter. And as Lydia pointed out, most agents don't trust attachments. Many want a short synopsis and up to 5 pages in the email itself. After the query, of course. Check the agent's guidelines to see what s/he prefers.
Cheryl Comment by Cheryl on November 11, 2009 at 1:17pm
Thanks, Lydia, for the link to Bransford's blog.
Lydia Sharp Comment by Lydia Sharp on November 11, 2009 at 10:44am
Kenneth,
Most agents don't like attachments, even if they require a synopsis or the first few pages of the ms with the query letter. It's best to read their individual guidelines before sending anything. That's the only way to know for sure. Best of luck to you!
 

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Cheryl Ruth Howell Lydia Sharp Kelly Schluterman Tricia Simpson Terry Towery DL Hammons Edwin D Ferretti III Elizabeth Prats Rachel Aukes Amy Jean Chase Jenn Lidster Kenneth E. Olson Nazarea Andrews donna taylor vivian cummings Justine Musk chava hudson Jeffrey Waldo Kimberly M Hughes Patty Sherry Bob Iozzia stacie g. Jen Christopherson Lilith des Cavernes Justine Hedman Mary Wasmuth Christine Church Z
 
 

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